Autumn Elements

by Daniel J   Oct 23, 2005


Wind in the trees,
Leaves shake and fall,
Coats ruffle, put on with ease.

Clouds in the sky,
Brown on the ground,
Fallen leaves make a rustling sound.

Scarves around necks,
Boots on feet,
Stomp in puddles on outings and treks.

Umbrellas held up,
For rain fills the air,
Falling on those caught unaware.
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(c) Daniel J 2005+
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  • 18 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    I see that you like to write about nature
    they are good

  • 18 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    I see that you like to write about nature
    they are good

  • 19 years ago

    by Shaelynn

    Oh yes I so wish...I am commenting and I dunno why...but good job mate.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Autumn is my favorite season. I believe it's the most beautiful time of year & this poem of yours captured its beauty.

    Keep up the splendid creativity.

    God bless & take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    Sweet =) it's a very happy poem. nice simple beat

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