Nothing to comment really, well done, don't change a thing!

Not only does that paint a beautiful picture of the four seasons as you are reading it, it makes a great point. People rush around, not really paying attention to all the nice things around us. Lovely poem, really, very nice.
~Jaime

Hey, I saw you on the boards and well something you said reminded me of...me :P . So I had to check your work out for my own curiosity. I'm quite happy that I did too, I really like this poem, the message sent - and the intentional stopping of the rhyme scheme, it really rubbed in the fact that I don't stop and smell the roses... Don't change a thing, and keep up the good writing :)