by xEmmax
Great poem, really good imagery xx |
Awsome poem, great setting if the scene |
Again, i liked the idea behind it and your choice of words is really good. |
by Truest Lies
That has a sweet, pure beauty about it. My only suggestion is that you change that i to an I, so that its easiers to read, without the small distraction, but of course as that is merely a matter of style, it doesn't really matter. |
This is soo good. i feel like that sometimes...well by sometimes i mean all the time...keep up the great work...u r really good 5/5 |
Hey winter is my time too. 5/5 |
Another very good poem... I loved the emotion behind it! It was beautifully written and I loved it! My favorite lines were: |
by Nee
Good poem |
by Darien
You are indeed very talented. I like this poem, and I will definitely be reading some more of your stuff. |
Hmm...very sweet...I love it...winter..what is it...from your description...i guess it's your favourite season in a year is it...I had never experience winter...but from your poem...I really can feel it... |
Very good Noni. I love your poems. They inspire me! Keep it up! |