Look wat you done to me

by sapphire   Oct 23, 2005


Tonight I'm gonna do Wat's right
End it all, end my life with this knife
theres no one i can trust
only this knife
because i know it gonna ease the pain. so as you see me lay in my casket, know all i did was
do Wat was right. the only thing i
had to live for was you but look Wat you've done to me.
so don't worry about me,
god had this planed out.
its my turn now,
i always knew we we're meant to be
but i want you know one
thing, I'll always love you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by `*`Silently_Hurting`*`

    Hey thank you for you comment on one of my poems, Its awesome to get feedback and also encouraging - it meant a lot.
    Now for your comment - this is a good poem, it has structure and very easy to understand where your coming from - keep up the work, you'll excel in poet, you'll see that you will get better as you write more poems.. Well done!

    Julia

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