5 very nice.

Thats how i feel with one of my friends, like exactly, but they dont' really know even after i've told them a couple of times.. it doesn't feel so good, but great job on the poem:D

I really like how this piece is kinda of like crying out to others to just stay and be there for them. Excellent job!
-water

5/5 yet another amazing poem i love reading your poems

Thats great
i lvoe it A LOT
tis so good and kol
great job
5/5