Nice write. This poem goes much deeper than just the words. I didn't understand how good this poem was until the end...Great job.

Keep writing
Christa

I can't say I really like this poem,I know you can do better...

The last two lines were good, but in the beginning, it seems as though it just keep going and going and you kinda lost your point in between.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

I really liked the message of your poem, and the title "Hazel To Grey" is so original. 5/5

Wow your realllllllllllly talented. this reminded of that slipknot song lol "while my eyes turn from blue to grey" anyways this was sooo good these were my favorite parts...

A human Cerberus, devouring our souls.
Forcing us to show you love and affection.
Only to kill it with your cruel rejection.

and

Replaced with Hatred, insensitivity, and depression.
An emotional vampire of lust and envy.
Sins of your soul one with this human...

i love your vocabulary and the way you chose to use it, great job!!!