Great poem...i feel the same way... although those thoughts cross my mind, i would never ever kill myself... there's too much going for you. Keep your head up... there's always a positive side to every situation *STAY STRONG*
love always
michelle cavalier

Me again!!! jeeze ur a sweetheart... thanks for the comment yes we should stay in touch...do u have myspace or msn or yahoo or any of that stuff??? if so let me know... you should really write more ur a great writer! hopefully talk to u soon!!
love always
michelle cavalier

Hey Shelby, this is Shelby! lol..Wow, by reading your work and then looking at mine, yes it does seem that we have a lot in common or relate to the same things. I really like this poem, it sounds a lot like the ones I have at home. You are so talented and I would like read some more, keep writing and thanks for commenting on my poem. Let's keep in touch! Do you have MSN? Loves and Hugs, Shelby Woods

Good poem

WOW! HOLY SHI_T! THAT ROCKED

GREATTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!
poem 5/5

Awesome. full of emotion. love it

That is so gd....so emotional, so dramatic, just how i like poems plus it makes a pretty convincing suicide note lol

xXx CoCoNuTT xXx **love**((conor))

Hey shelby lyn!
thats a very good poem... you should really put some more on here..and when u do, let me know so i can read them k? but once again, its a really good poem! first loves are great ... but also suck! lol ok well... keep writing...
love always ♥
michelle lynn

p.s. nice middle name by the way ;)