Great Love?

by Becky   Oct 23, 2005


I think this could be
the beginning
of a great love

but do i want this flower to bloom
shall i water it dubiously
put it in the sun
where it thrives the most

if i do let it grow
will it be a red rose
black
white
yellow
or pink

or shall i let it wilt
before it even blossoms

what if it has thorns
too many to handle

what if i brave the thorns
all the cuts and scrapes
just to get to the flower

and what if when i get there
it isn't worth it
not in the end?

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  • 19 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow becky! i loved the metaphor of the rose in this one, the descriptions were great, another excellent poem! thanku so much for your comments, they honestly mean so much to me. take care,
    lots of luv, emma xxx