Omg i love this...i love how u do the comparission keep it up girlie...and if u want check out a few of mine ill diffently keep up with u

Okay... its kinda funny to think that you are a 15 year old... haha more like 2? yeah... well all i wanted to say is that no im not pmsing and that it doesnt really make me to happy... or anyone else on this site that your "commenting" mean things about... to hear that i did somthing wrong... or actually MY FRIEND did somthing wrong for saying that they like my poems... so if your going to b**ch off to someone maybe i should give you her #!!! besides... commenting should be for people that could say NICE things to people about there poems... or just simply saying that they need to improve on somthing...

**listen im sorry if this sounds really mean... im honsetly not that type of person... its just that my poems mean the world to me and i dont really apprecite when people tell me that i shouldnt of did somthing... when its not even really there buisness... so im sorry if i affended you at all im just trying to state a fact... **

and by the way i love this poem!! you have really good talent... 5/5 i loved it!

Hey.. that was pretty gud.. i lykd the topic and the imagery u put in the poem.. ur rhyme was gud too.. but ur flow falterred at times, then went bak on:D.. gr8 job nonetheless
keep it up
Nannoush

Aawww!!! thank you soo much! like i said before my poems mean the world to me so yeah you could understand.. hah!! but anyways thank you soo much for your comment it means a lot to me

and for everything that you said before... its ok we all have a bi*chey side to show sometimes!!! hehe

love ya!
*.:morgan:.*

Beautiful! I love the imagery in it! I know what you're going through...and I'm sorry. It's the worst feeling I have ever known!

I've already told you but I love how you described your relationship!
love bertha

Loved it. Thanks for the comment on mine. I'm kinda starting to slow down on writing for some reason but ill make sure to start again. Keep on writing. *Props*

-Jin

I love your poems please send me any more you come up with at laffytaffy33513@aol.com

I love your poems please send me any more you come up with at laffytaffy33513@aol.com

Gosh...you are so flipping talented! lol, keep up the great work, hun! I love reading your poems!! (Even though I think I've said that already)

You're an amazing writer. I once again really enjoy this poem. GREAT
-JamieJay-

I love this poem and how you compard it to a rose! I love it.