Beutiful i kike alot. Keep it up.
-HUGS N KISSES!

Fabuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Well done Sawah Poo!!! keep up the good Work!!!!!!!!!!
[=-Jonny-=]

This is beautiful, and the imagery is magical ^_^

stef/xx

Hey, that's actually probably one of the best poems I've read on here. Not saying that others are bad, I just have high standards (and yes I know mine aren't that great either, never said they were) But great job keep it up :)
Arielle xo...

This is one of the better poems on this sight. It's practically perfect and I can't give you any pointers because I like it the way it is!!!