Good work, as always lol. i really liked the openin verse agen, it sorta sets the mood 4 the rest o the poem.

good work. keep goin.

xXx

Magnificent! It's very well written and i can really relate to this one. You did a very good job at expressing yourself. I love the emotion you put into it. *hugs*

~Jessica

I really like this poem. I understand it alot. I mean no family is perfect at all we all have problems. I mean i use to cut, pop pills my brother is doing pot my dad yells at me i mean we all have probs and it's actually good to have them to learn from mistakes and it's good to know that no one is ordinary. You did an amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.