Lovely work...
nice style
its different...like u !!!
loved reading this
thanks for the 100th vote...as a favour i'd vote all ur poems 5/5 for u
infact this one also get 5/5
if u find time do read more of my stuff...
love
amy
This is good i think you kinda a little bit got your ideas mixed up though
I love you,
But them,
They're different,
there you're saying being different is a bad thing
But that's them,
I'm different,
So why can't you be too?
there you're saying being different is a good thing, so i dont know exactly what you meant to say but i think you just worded it wrong or i'm reading it wrong i dunno anyways besides that cause i think i get the point of this poem anyways the first 6 lines were my favorites i think you worded them very well it was a very interesting poem so 5/5 i liked this good job