Despair

I really like this. The only thing I can say is "feal" is "feel" and "witch" is "which," but other than that beautiful. 5/5, Em

Hey dis was short but it was laid out hell gwd...gr8t work...keep up luv to read more
luvv dia mwaz xoxo
luv ya tc

Awesome poem
short but nicely done.. excellent wording
i wouldn't give anything less than a five definately..
if u could.. pls check out my poems
thanx
k keep writting!!