Awesome poem
short but nicely done.. excellent wording
i wouldn't give anything less than a five definately..
if u could.. pls check out my poems
thanx
k keep writting!!

Hey dis was short but it was laid out hell gwd...gr8t work...keep up luv to read more
luvv dia mwaz xoxo
luv ya tc

I really like this. The only thing I can say is "feal" is "feel" and "witch" is "which," but other than that beautiful. 5/5, Em