by Gary Jurechka Oct 24, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
At three o'clock in the morning |
by Laura Anne
Mmm... a very erie poem. made me feel kind of panicky while reading it. me like. |
by Lyn
A very descriptive poem. Imaginative with an economy of words. I read and reread it. |
by aaron c s
Sounds like my life. great portrayance* of life in the dark. i loved how the words flowed together. |
by Larry
Don't stop writing -- you have a lot more subject matter to work with -- the consistent with your rhyming and verse layout like you have been. Now only three lines for each verse -- capitalized the first word of each verse and end each verse with an exclamation mark and skip the line after each verse |
by Larry
Don't stop writing -- you have a lot more subject matter to work with -- the consistent with your rhyming and verse layout like you have been. Now only three lines for each verse -- capitalized the first word of each verse and end each verse with an exclamation mark and skip the line after each verse |