Solitary refinement

by Gary Jurechka   Oct 24, 2005


When the waves are placid
and lucid eyes burn bright,
the dark chaos has passed
into blue skies serene,
in fresh shafts of light
all is left purged and clean,
from insane screams into tranquil dreams,
to save yourself from your self,
yourself need only intervene.

circa 1994-1998(?)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    I like it a very good write and an enjoyable to read full of depth!

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Great poem. it felt like there was meaning behind everyword and it all wouldnt fit together without the last. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Larry

    Track capitalizing the first word of every line -- finding unique ways to paragraph your verses can give it at greater appeal -- slowdown.

  • 19 years ago

    by disorientated

    Wow, i really enjoyed reading both of those poems, beautiful metaphore well done!

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