Untiled...need help with the title!!

by *kAnDiE*   Oct 24, 2005


Sink into the sunset
let the waves crash over me
wash away with the wind
finally ill be free

sway with the grass
and blend with the sea
just use your imagination

run though the corn fields
lay with the sky
watch the clouds fade away
don't let anyone see u cry

stay awake too watch the stars
sing with the birds
shatter like glass
tarn like leaves
break down and hide your pain inside

wait for the sun too rise
and then start too play pretend again....

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  • 18 years ago

    by jojo88

    Hay i love it i think u shuld call it "all over again" that will be good 4 it

  • 18 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    I think you should call it Pretending to Live like the other person said. By the way, it's an amazing poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Wow. that was really good and really sweet.

  • 19 years ago

    by tinkerbell

    Hey what the poem is good

  • 19 years ago

    by Jo

    Um, i'm not really good at helpin' other ppl with titlez of poemz, but..how 'bout sumthin' like Blending In, or Pretending To Live, or sumthin'..?? i dunno, i told ya i wasn't good at it, but there's a couple suggestionz for ya n-e-wayz..but other than that, good job!

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