Wow deep poem... If is true im very sorry...don't worry just keep on writng u'll b great......... =) 5/5

Thank U. Yes it`s true, all the poems that I write are about things that I feel because of things that have happened in my life :)

Wow you never would have suspected who died in this poem so it keep the readers drawn in. Great Job. very describing of all te emotions around. 5/5