This is simply fantastic.The rhyme scheme flows beautifully and you use some unique rhymes.But it is the emotional content that really strikes such a chord-the fear of one you love not loving you, all the anxiety, doubt, self worth-you capture it all perfectly.I hope this had a happy ending.Wonderful work on this piece, truly.

Another rally original theme for a poem. it has soo much emotion and feeling in it. i shall not critique this one at all for i wouldnt change a thing. beautiful poem.
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