by HansRik Oct 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I cannot say in words how much I've loved |
by AshLetitia
I can't say that your comment on one of my poems made me the happiest girl in the world, but how can I hold such a grudge when your poetry moves me so? Your advice is truely helpful, as much as the child in me want's to argue and express some form of dislike, it is impossible. My mother once wrote as you did, before tragedy discouraged her talent. This originality reminds me of how she once was, and moves me to the brink of tears. I only wish my talent could flourish and someday evolve into my own personal style of expression. |
by AshLetitia
I can't say that your comment on one of my poems made me the happiest girl in the world, but how can I hold such a grudge when your poetry moves me so? Your advice is truely helpful, as much as the child in me want's to argue and express some form of dislike, it is impossible. My mother once wrote as you did, before tragedy discouraged her talent. This originality reminds me of how she once was, and moves me to the brink of tears. I only wish my talent could flourish and someday evolve into my own personal style of expression. |
by shobhana kumar
Beautifuly done. it is a pleasure to read your poems. |
by Little Dot
Beautiful work on this poem. I thought it was done with a lot of emotion. I thought you did a great job. |
by Ariana
You've def. got a unique style of writing here. I found this more traditionally poetic than whats mostly on this site, and even though I don't understand all of it I could still read the emotion in it. This type of poetry is very hard for me to write - I've never been able to finish a whole piece in this style! I don't have any suggestions for this one - nice stuff :) |