by deadnalone Oct 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I'm not sure where to start, |
This poem is awesome. i have nothing negative to say. i love the simile's and metaphors. |
by confusion
Youre writings got een better hun. so original |
by Toni
Another brilliant poem! I had to read it a few times cos of the rhythm being irregular, but i actually dont think you should change that because it really helps to portray your emotions, especially the last three stanzas which are shorter. Its brilliant El xxx *hugs tightly* |
That is an excellent poem, i love the images you used to describe how you feel, i particularly like this stanza: |
by Lemma
Omg this poem is awesome. It's sooo sad *hugsies*. Love the first stanza. |