Comments : Forever love

  • 19 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Her smile was the beauty of the universe itself
    her tear was a pearl from the bottom of the sea

    wow......... this was so awesome i can't even begin to explain. i think i liked this one more than your others.... not sure why. anyway, the two lines i pasted up the top? those are magnificant. i havn't read anything like it in so long....
    -Suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Beautiful job Ramy. This poem is amazing. It has so much emotion in it. You have a wonderful poem here.