Wow...so..so....WOW.. lol. ur awesome matt. my inspiration :-D

That was really well written, you paint a picture of this story SO well and SO vividlt it makes it so easy for the reader to connect. The wording was impecable, I'd just say the flow was a bit halted here and there, but nonetheless an AMAZING piece.

I love this poem.

The seventh stanza is my favorite; excellent job.

Sorry not much of a comment on the last one, but I was at work.. =\

WOW...man...that's real good...wot can i say about it...hmm...nothing...except it's a true masterpiece...

Hmm...I came back to check it out again...can't say it's the same though...cause I think this is far better than mine...haha...lol...well...hmm...I will love to do poems that rhyme...the thing is my knowledge on words r not wide...so...it's hard finding the words...I manage to write the poem is because I found a website...that can easily find words that rhymes for me...haha...lol...I might write more...but might take some time...lol...as I said before...u r one of the best poets I've seen...and I don't think anyone can doubt it...it's an honoured to have you to comment on my poems...hehe...seriously...and hmm...my name is Jane...and yep...I do live in Malaysia...but no...I'm not a malay...most people assume I am...lol...and can I ask u 1 more thing...y izzit u seem 2 relate 2 the word M so much...Matt, Matters, Male(haha...that's 4 sure)...Massacuttes(Or however u spell it)...lol...that is just coincidence I know...just joking...lol...

LOVE...PEACE..:P

Awesome poem matt..truly in awe at every poem i read of urs.
I miss your comments:'(
hope to talk to u soon xoxoxo