Wow! Great poem! Truly wonderful! I am a fan of the abab cdcd rhyme scheme and you did such a very nice job of it! Wonderful poem! My favorite stanza was:

"I wish i could let my blood flow
Just slowly leave this shell
I yearn so much, just to go
And leave this, my living hell"

Keep up the great work!

~BJ~

This is sooo good and i have to say that i really enjoyed reading this...there were moments when i felt the same way...5/5 and u really deserved it...keep up the great job...
kisses