Good poem...nice symbolism. I liked it. You shouldn't lie in poetry by the way

What did i lie about????

In the poem sincerley yours, you implied that I left you, when in reality i was trying to make u see that i would be there for you, it really hurt to think you disragarded all of my attempts just to make lisa happy, and anyway, poems arent as good when your intention is for someone to read them, which is what you did. Only advice.

Great work brad. i liked it for many reasons, one of them being the way it flowed, another being the great wording you used, very intelligent. I also like the way that it told a story, and that the girl did a full circle.

brad