by Christopher Liau Oct 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Eyes closed so tight, |
Wow very well written i liked it so much 5/5 |
Aw.. this was written soo well i love it .. great job keep it up |
by Atomic
This poem flow pretty flawless. |
by Carmen
The last sentance of the second stanza made no sense; how does a mountain scape tie into this poem? you should explain it better if you are going to add it in. |
Awww soooo sweet !! |