My daddy

by Nina Star   Oct 24, 2005


Don\'t say daddy
when daddy wont be there
dont say my daddy
makes you feel scared
dont say daddy
daddy makes ma cry
dont say daddy
And dont say why

Tell me why you did that daddy
please tell me why
silent tears fall
as i cry
i don\'t get to see you anymore
there say its against the law

im joining the army daddy
to fight in the war
maybe then ill understand
what you went through
don\'t worry daddy
i will live
a few years later ill be knocking on your door
maybe at our favourite time half past four
I miss you daddy
Do you miss me too
Maybe up in heaven daddy i will meet you

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Aww. you can feel the emotion in it. its really sad, but it was really great. nice job 5/5 on this one

  • 17 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    Aww this one nearly made me cry

    so powerful
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Yours-Truly~*~

    Aaaaw thtz so sad but gr8 poem keep up th gd work
    ~*~Yours-Truly~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    Awww thats a reallu sad poem..i luv it tho..it makes me want 2 cry somethin i have been avoiding..stay strong
    ~*Katherine*~

  • 19 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    Awww hun stay strong...I'm always here for you know that right? Keep on writting good work...!

    Aims :P