by Dark Kitten Oct 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
My heart goes out to all those who, |
by Moose
Can relate to this in many ways. cept for the prostitution thing. It was an amazing poem, and I loved how you ended it, repeating the first stanza as the last one. very beautiful. |
by Fallen~Tears
Wow excellent job |
by amber
Great job |
by azlan26
"hide their stuff," I'm not sure if that fitted with the rest of the poem |
Thats a nice poem...shos gr8 feeling, n all the rhyming seemd so smoothy...5/5 |