Thats a nice poem...shos gr8 feeling, n all the rhyming seemd so smoothy...5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

"hide their stuff," I'm not sure if that fitted with the rest of the poem
I like the use of millions of pieces, makes it sound unrepairable
and the use of caps on every - good empahsis
KEEP WRITING =]

Great job

Wow excellent job

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Can relate to this in many ways. cept for the prostitution thing. It was an amazing poem, and I loved how you ended it, repeating the first stanza as the last one. very beautiful.