That is so sad. Your a great writer and I hope everything gets better for you. Keep you head up:)

A good poem with some strong emotions, remember to explore your ideas and check your spelling and grammar because you have a few mistakes through here. Keep going!

This is a sad poem but you wrote it well.
The emotion is powerful and well expressed.

xxx cici xxx

That was so sad.. amazingly written, beautiful words.. and heart-breaking.. i especially loved ur last lines.. they wer reli gud... hope ur ok.. those wer some powerful words and emotions
take care and stay smiling
Nannoush

Awwww!!! i REALLY want6 to cry since it's really beautiful and sad the emotions are killin in this poem! :) great job! 5/5

Queen Ashlin