Wow hun this is amazing, i'm going to add u to my favs
keep it up 5.5

Very nice poem.
I liked the wording you used, and the ideas behind it.
You are very talented.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Yes, there were a lot of ideas behind this poem, and the wording did sound nice, but maybe it would have sounded better had it rhymed...

Good Writing!
beth

This is very good...thankz 4 all of ur warm comments and i appreciate u very much...5/5 i love all of ur poemz and i love the way u write...keep it up

Wow! This poem was amazing. I really like the flow and the rhyme scheme! You are an amazing poet! I really liked that poem... when I first saw it, I was like... OMG, not a LONG poem... but as I started reading, I couldn't stop! Good job on keeping interest! It's amazing! Great job and keep up the wonderful work!

~BJ~