Very good!

Good job gurlie!! i luv it!! and guess what!! i can completely relate to it!! hehe...we both got what we wanted!

Hey, great poem duckie... who is it about? sheesh, i feel so left out of the loop now... so far away.... sigh
5/5
hannah

B.E.A.U.tiful poem, keep up the great work :)

Theme excellent music an rythem ,as well. how you moved from a stanza to another was done in balance.

wishing u all the best

Aww it's so cute! ^_^ I loved it. The flow was nice, and the idea was great. Very well written, and you seem like a great writer. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

I liked this.
I thought it was really sweet.
There are a couple of spelling errors that need to be fixed, but apart from that you did a wonderful job.

Wow thats... great!

I can almost relate. Although I havent really met my savior!

made me realise how much I miss my love. Its sad, but its also a patience game.

This describes it perfectly.
thumbs up!