by aaron c s
That was beautiful. truer words couldnt ahve been spoken. nice flow as well. |
by oldthings
Beautiful poem everyone should be so lucky to meet the person who can do that for them and experience it. beautiful! |
This is a beautiful poem and i often feel like that...great job in expressing yourself....5/5 by the way |
Awww this was sooo beautifuuuul!! i loved it i especially liked how you went into talking about the stars the moon and the sun that was so cute i loved the flow excellent 5/5 |
Hey its me again |
by Tess
Ruby as far as flow is concerned- you got it just right! Well done... these are the poems I most enjoy reading! 5/5! |
by Void
That's really sweet, and I love how you brought some metaphorical warmth and things into your poem, it was really nice to read. Good job!:) |
by Sango
I love it, I felt the waves, the warmth & all from this poem, i must admit you're an excellent writer, i'll add you to my favorites!!!!!! |
Absolutly beautifull..It flowed amazingly.. im speechless, great work!! I really loved it!!! |