Flower Garden

by CoLliN   Oct 25, 2005


Flower Garden

sit and i wonder about you
the things that my eyes tell me
i wonder if its true.........

like the clouds your unpredictable...taking different shapes
i move free like the wind....flowing..... no matter my stakes

your face, soft, tender and clean like a king\'s silk
your cheeks glow as if your white as milk

you sit there amongst the flowers looking so innocent
i want to tell you something but i cant find the right compliment

trying not to look in the past and see my dirts
but i can\'t help when i see you.....because loving you hurts

a beauty so rare
its almost something i can\'t bear

i promise i will take you to a place of flower
a place where you can accept my shower

a place of freedom
a place where we can find our kingdom

a place of endless white and yellow flowers flowing far beyond the horizon
where we can sit together and view the rising sun
as it reflects on each petal i\'d rather be there with no one

no one but you.....

something so rare, a beauty so blue moonish
something that seems so right
fairy tales aren\'t real so to think of it would be rubbish
i don\'t care because watching you right now is so right

hug over my back and kiss me on my cheek
.....your hands overflow with love and there\'s no leak
your movements are so bold and yet your so meek
the assurance of you being mine is somehow concrete

hearing the sweet music played by the japaniese opra
soothes our hearts as we are exposed to each other\'s aura

Flower Garden....a place where i promise to take you....a place of freedom to care
despite the obstacles, destractions and exhaustion i promise to take you there

By CoLliN
(Influenced by the movie \"House of Flying Daggers\")MASTER PIECE

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow...SPPECHLESS..this, this poem was OUTSTANDING....you do your own thing and you do your own thing REALLY WELL>>.KEEP IT UP..POETRY WOULDN"T BE WITHOUT YOU>.SO DO THE WORLD A FAVRO AND NEVER STOP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!

    ur sis
    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Paula

    Really nice collin, i cam visulise it, it is really beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by LovelessAndConfused

    Beautiful 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Collin, that was really good. I liked the flow and emotion towards it. Hope to read more of your work.

    -Jennifer.