Collin, that was really good. I liked the flow and emotion towards it. Hope to read more of your work.

-Jennifer.

Beautiful 5/5

Really nice collin, i cam visulise it, it is really beautiful

Wow...SPPECHLESS..this, this poem was OUTSTANDING....you do your own thing and you do your own thing REALLY WELL>>.KEEP IT UP..POETRY WOULDN"T BE WITHOUT YOU>.SO DO THE WORLD A FAVRO AND NEVER STOP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!

ur sis
lissa