by dReAMeRgRL18 Oct 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Tonight I saw a shooting star |
by Ambar K
Love at times is the best feeling in the world but then it hurts like hell too, I know. But the only way to last is to be strong or you'll never make it!keep it up it was great! Read some of mine if you get a chance. |
Its a very good start, constructively i would tell you to try and make the lines rhyme in a certain order. |