Comments : My Wish

  • 19 years ago

    by leif Estenson

    Its a very good start, constructively i would tell you to try and make the lines rhyme in a certain order.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ambar K

    Love at times is the best feeling in the world but then it hurts like hell too, I know. But the only way to last is to be strong or you'll never make it!keep it up it was great! Read some of mine if you get a chance.