Untitled(friendship)

by RadianceInReverse   Oct 25, 2005


He's been my friend for so long
but now all he does is ignore me
and I ponder on what went wrong
Cause our friendship used to be so strong!

How did our relationship die?
All I want to know is why?
Why did you have to say goodbye?
Was it because Ive changed and matured?
I thought our friendship was strong
enough to endure!

Here I am starting to cry
when I remember the fun we've had and the memories we shared
All by myself I lie
I want so much to walk up to you and just say "Hi"
I could try...but I don't dare

Its like your falling into a dark chasm
and I'm reaching out to grab your hand
but I can't quite reach
and as you fall deeper and deeper into the darkness
my heart continually breaks over and over again!

Plz Comment:) This poem is about a friendship I had that slowly fell apart!!!! But now i love him to death we became friends agian..YAY

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Wonderful, just boil it down a bit more to the essentials and try and steer away from slang*looks like you've already fixed that (embrassed)* Keep it up hun!

    Love Jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by Ella

    I love it Joclyn you are truly a good poet.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I know what you mean...my friendship with someone is slowly falling apart too...I spot a few mistake...see...I'll show you where...

    I'll I want to know is why?
    All I want to know is why?

    Its like your falling into a dark cahasm
    It's like you're falling into a dark chasm.

    and Im reaching into grab your hand
    and I'm reaching out to grab your hand.(I don't know whether this is right?)

    my heart continually breaks over and over agian!-again

    hope I help you...and it will be better if you arrange your sentence neatly and used the whole word instead of short form...you know...like cause...instead of cuz?

    That's all...and don't get me WRONG...I love this poem...very very much...

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