Don't change a thing! It's soooo beautiful as is! Great job as usual...

It's already too good for words. you don't need to change it at all! but there's one thing happening all around me lately... people are dying,or getting sick,etc. and i'm not able to help them & even if they want me to pray for them i mostly forget to and then they die and i feel like it's my fault. you see,my prayers were always answered when i was little. all of them. and people still think they can be answered but i still forget. it's very complicated.

abt ur love problem:

...well...that's actually how my last relationship blew up. i liked another guy besides my bf and my bf found out and broke up with me. hard,slow,and emotionless. but if the wind strikes,you will be left on neither side standing but falling down. if you want a good relationship decide who you love more. and in a good relationship you have to be faithful to make it work. if you don't you will miss so much. that's all. and above all,whatever path you take just remember the truth will set you free.

thanks for the comment! i finally got a message from you! lol. i was hoping for a message from you for weeks,sphinxy! weeks! but yay *cradles comment* thanks :)

id luv to hear more from you,just feel good ok? cuz i'm almost the whole way depression free! just gotta stop using the marker lol. well good luck,ttyl :)

I am sorry for your friend's loss. Give her a hug for me!

I don't think it can be improved, it's incredibly wonderful as is. I mean, really beautiful. Of course it's good enough! I love it.

I need more time to read your lovely poetry!

Rose
xxxx