I loved that one too. i felt the same way about one of my friends. we were best friends from kindergarden ill the ninth grage and then things starting falling apart and she doent want to go back and change things even though she knows its for the better.
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I really like ur poem gurli! i totally can relate cuz i know how you feel! i feel for someone once then we broke up stayed frins for a while then bunches of drama broke us apart then a few months later he moved to seattle, Washington! so keep up ur good work and i'll read more

I like this one a lot too! The best part about it is how it portrays the pain of friendship, it makes you realize that friendship can hurt to and it's not always happy! Good job, keep writing!