That was good it really was...putting your felings down on paper is really easy but u made it brilliant

keep up the good work

Love at times is the best feeling in the world but then it hurts like hell too, I know. But keep it up it was great! Read some of mine if you get a chance.

I can relate to this.
Good poem.

*Blood Shot Eyes*

I knoe ezactly how you feel. i feel that way now. me and this guy were going to start going out and then he called me up yesterday and told me that he hooked up with this other girl. it made me feel so bad and now i can even face him. i cant talk to him anymore. not even on the phone. even though i c ard about him so much maybe ill soon forget about him and move on to better things and find someone that loves me for me and dont go behind my back looking for someone else while they are telling you how much they love you and that they will never leave you.
- thornton

All i did was love!the heading says sooo much!i really loved every thing about that poem!i no how u feel so just hang in there and stay strong!things ever stay the same way 4 ever and thats just a part of life!but m sure that ur heart will go on!and u will find a new love and the love uz sare will be real!u write great so keep it up!and keep shining!...josie....

This is another one that I really liked. You seem to be very honest and true to who you are, I can tell that what you write comes straight from your heart and you don't front at all. That's what makes it so good!