Wow. I can completely understand what your going through. It seems like I've already been through this, it gets harder but you will make it through. Keep your head up.

Hey...you commentd my poem...so yea i am commenting yours...but that is such a great poem you are a greater writer unlike me! but yea take a look at some of my other poems...everyone that sees this! but yea please comments if you read them! thanx!

Bravo

Its pritty good, though i like how the mood switches to the end, its bitter sweet, if you understand.

It was good i liked it in away it remind me of this dude

I like it kinda unclear at points but i really like it its good

I agree with joseph b, it's a big unstable ( is that the right word?! lol ) in places but it's still good. check out some of mine if you get a chance. thanks. x