It's meant to represent the world is getting a worse place and one day there won't be any good left but only the new generation can change it. can survive it. xxxx

Thats great
i love it!!!
alot of emotions !
great job 5/5

OMG...that's totally awesome...I will comment on something...but this poem makes me speechless...it's flawless and definitely a true masterpiece...

And so I want to ask you something on Melissa Westfall's behalf...she's going to publish a poetry book...there will be a few poets work in it...she's still looking for more poems to be put in it...and don't you worry...she won't steal your works...she'll put your name in it...if you are willing to let her use yours...you can tell her...or you can tell me...k...that's all....luv ya...Jane

OMG you are such a great poet evey poem I read gets better and better if i could i would give you a 10/5 since these poems are great. KUDOS!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK luv kal

This poem totally rocked you are a great poet keep it up!