by Becky Karen
This poem expresses a lot of feeling fake or real i dont know but it was brilliant. keep it up. x |
by Renee
Aww babe, I -truly- hope this isn't about you. You don't deserve that kind of pain. you don't deserve -any- kind of pain. You're amazing Sarah, so strong, I don't know how you do it. I wish I could be there for you babe, I wish I could be right by your side, you don't know how much you mean to me *hugs* I hope you are alright, and I'm here for you, please talk to me. If this -is- true for you, you can't let your mom make you take the blame. None of that is your fault. Please don't burden yourself with that. And if abuse is the case with your mom, well I'll personally come to Sacktown Canada and sack your mom. I've got a few other people to take care of in Canada anyways. Keep your head up babe, and you know I'm here for you whenever you need me. I love you |
by melody eyes
Great poem, very emotional, nearly made me cry. It hit me in the heart. x x |
by SPC Ecklund
I love your poem chick a dee! i've been down that road except with my dad! just keep and believe in faith and believe in a happier place and thinks will always get better! if not then honey you need to talk to someone! i'm always here! so if you ever need |
Aww, this poem broke my heart and brought tears to my eyes, hope this isn't true?? It was so hard to read, but it grabbed me from the begining to the end, such an amazing poem, very deep and full of emotions....Perfect flow and rhyming....Hope t you are okay?? |
by Brandy
That is so great and i would like for you to go visit my peom and vote for me!! |
WOW |
Speechless, it hit me hard. Just the fact that I've been through it and someone else has too. It's crazy. But everyone goes through it ( if it's even true ) But hope it gets better. You've been thorugh so much and i can tell it in your writing. Keep it up _ SM |