Very interesting topic and great way of describing something so simple

Good work. a great metaphor to pic to compare something so beautiful. keep it up!

Hey aaron,
short but enjoyable to read.
I really enjoyed reading it.
simply beautiful.
yeah, that's it.
simply a beautiful piece.
take care,
marjan

I really liked this idea, its very short but i think it holds a lot of meaning, and you ended this poem very well. this was my favorite part though

Softness of the desert sand
Thoughts bring us hand in hand

very nice, 5/5

I really like this poem of yours. It's short, but you wrote it beautifully. Keep writing and take care.
> Kiesha