by Lost Girl Oct 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Take my words and polish them until they shine |
by lana
I liked it |
by Graham
Why was I such a knob? |
by katie!
I love you, so sorry I am not back quicker than I thought I would be, I hate the fact i am still away, I love you, with all my heart and soul |
by Roulin
Hey Black, Its pretty good, I agree with the other person you've written better but haven't we all? |
by No1ButMe
Hey, this wasn't one of your best poems but it was still really good. It had a really strong ending that totally captured me. The middle gets a lil confusing but I think it wraps it up nicely at the end. Well keep up the good work. 5/5 |