Hey, this wasn't one of your best poems but it was still really good. It had a really strong ending that totally captured me. The middle gets a lil confusing but I think it wraps it up nicely at the end. Well keep up the good work. 5/5

Hey Black, Its pretty good, I agree with the other person you've written better but haven't we all?

Luv Scarlet xxxx

I love you, so sorry I am not back quicker than I thought I would be, I hate the fact i am still away, I love you, with all my heart and soul

Why was I such a knob?

I liked it
it was great
keep wrighting you are a great writer and keep up all your hard work

never stop wrightin

from lana