Scars: Part 1

by RadianceInReverse   Oct 25, 2005


These piercing tears are rolling down my cheek
Leaving these undeniable mocking wounds
That will soon turn into another set of scars
That reminds me of the pain you left me with
As you walked back from whence you came
Here stands the empty shell that once held my soul
Soaring high, looking back at your spiteful eyes

I wrote this poem with help from Pure Silence (thanx agian Jenn) Plz comment!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ella

    Very good joc i love it and i love you

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Yes, this had a lot of feeling in it, and dark emotion. I liked that about it.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    I love how your poertys progressed in such a small amount of time, its so wonderful watching it! maybe add some puntuation and get rid of the spaces *it happens in the email by mistake it drives me insane:P* (Hugs)
    Love you!
    Jenn

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