I love how your poertys progressed in such a small amount of time, its so wonderful watching it! maybe add some puntuation and get rid of the spaces *it happens in the email by mistake it drives me insane:P* (Hugs)
Love you!
Jenn

Yes, this had a lot of feeling in it, and dark emotion. I liked that about it.

Good Writing!
beth

Very good joc i love it and i love you