This was a beautiful poem. And the idea you express here is so true. Life is filled with uncertainties. So don't depend on tomorrow to be just another continuation of today.

Touching, very well written, and a geat truth too.

Wow..that was amazing...jeez...no fair! i wish my poems were this good! gosh..well hey thanks for commenting on my poems! means a lot! lol not sure why i still am on this site cuz i never really pay attention to it.lol sad but ya great poem A+ work! :D
~NaTe~

So sad but the flow and the wording is magnificent. i loved reading it. 5/5

It was rough at first, but smoothed out. Awesome poem, lots of emotion. XDXD

Hey, this poem inspired me to write one on the same subject so I want to thank you for that.....it's called "Forgotten Friend"....check it out if you like. Keep up the excellent work. You're very talented. Thanks again.

Good poem, but i hope i don't have to wait so long for your next one, lol.

Brad

P.S. i did mean waht i said at the end of 'live the lie' but after my recent accident that's all changed. You can read about it in 'oh what a day'.

P.P.S thanks for your offer on talking to you if i need it, but i find realesing through my poems is the best way to let it out